ISE 1 Controlled Written Examination Correction

Task 1

Traditional teaching rules success

The Allsop Academy is currently one of the best schools in the UK, we’re a lot of students achieve access in high level universities. This was not always like that.

Allsop used to be one of the worst schools in the UK, students were badly behaved and the structure was very old. When the new head teacher came, Michael Wilson, many things changed. Michael believes in strong discipline and traditional teaching. Students have denied access to fast food for lunch, students can’t access the school if they don’t have their correct uniform tidy with short hair, they stand in lines waiting for their teachers, and if they don’t do their homework they have to stay on after school. The school changed their buildings for new ones, and got a lot of money with Michael. In conclusion I think that this school had a noteworthy change for the best.

Task 2

Hello, how are you? On your last letter you told me that it was very difficult for you to learn foreign languages, so I’m writing to help you.

I really enjoy learning a language, it helps a lot in life, and expands your knowledge. Some mental diseases can be prevented by learning and speaking regularly two or more languages. Even if learning a language could be good for your health, it could be a conundrum. Learning a language takes time and effort, you need to learn a lot of new words, the pronunciation, rules, etc. Personally I think that the hardest part is learning and using correctly the pronunciation when speaking. Learning the words is essential, it’s easier when you learn by hard some basic words, because then there are some words made by other words. You can also listen to music or see movies, it also helps a lot.


Trinity Task: Section 3 – task 2

The day I met my favourite film star

Yesterday I met Robert Downey Jr, I won a prize from a history competition, which was near where RDJ was eating in a very expensive restaurant. The prize was a day with him.

I was taken to the restaurant by his personal driver. RDJ was eating his favourite food, and offered me to take a seat. He said he would pay everything, so I didn’t have to care about prices, he is the most expensive actor, and when I say expensive, I mean it.

I think RDJ was very nice, despite his dark past with the drugs. I don’t think I will meet him again. It was a really nice experience.

Word count: 110

Task 5 section 2

The college canteen

On the last days the college canteen has been selling only unhealthy food to the students, uncognizant of the damage that it generates to the students, it is concomitant to the great number of diseases it produces. The canteen needs to abjure selling unhealthy food. We need to abrogate french fries, hamburgers, gaseous drinks, hot dogs, etc. The exact type of food that the canteen has to sell is a conundrum. You cant exactly know which food to sell, variations of carbohidrates, and vitamins, proteins, etc. A burger with salad, for example, is not un-healthy as the popular belief, as it is balanced. It is important for students to be healthy to avoid many diseases.

WC: 111